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Re: My images ;)
your frankensteins look really good! I can't believe that this is your first try, youe were so creative.
(exept the guy with the silver armor and the yellow banner: his breast and shoulders are too large, he looks like He-Man.)
I can't rate your self-drawn sprite, because I never tried that myself so far.
I'll leave that to the experienced artists.
(exept the guy with the silver armor and the yellow banner: his breast and shoulders are too large, he looks like He-Man.)
I can't rate your self-drawn sprite, because I never tried that myself so far.
I'll leave that to the experienced artists.
may the source be with you
=(^.^)= nyan~
=(^.^)= nyan~
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Re: My images ;)
Suggestion on the Killer sprite.
Maybe change the color of the armor? When I first started this post I thought he was shirtless but saw it was some sort of armor when I zoomed in.
Maybe change the color of the armor? When I first started this post I thought he was shirtless but saw it was some sort of armor when I zoomed in.
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Re: My images ;)
i think that the 1. is better, because the armor has the same contrast and outline as the rest of the unit.
the 2. armor is too shady compared to the rest of the sprite. it looks like it it is floating in front of the unit.
but when you give the 2. armor a stronger outline, it will become better than the 1. one.
the 2. armor is too shady compared to the rest of the sprite. it looks like it it is floating in front of the unit.
but when you give the 2. armor a stronger outline, it will become better than the 1. one.
may the source be with you
=(^.^)= nyan~
=(^.^)= nyan~
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Re: My images ;)
Something looks off on the second sprite. Something about the body/torso area. Like it's way too thin on the left side(our left). I dunno, it's hard to actually put into words.
Other two look good.
Other two look good.
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Re: My images ;)
Hands look fine. The upper chest piece looks weird but I suppose from the angle works. Other suggestion is throw something in the hood. You don't need a face but maybe a red(or color of your choice) eye shinging from within.
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